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When You're Gone

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The rain fell silently as a group of white figures stood around a stone marker. It was raining today in the Fire Nation, which was odd, since it was summer. The group of five was completely still, and they huddled close to each other; not from the rain, but from sadness. No one made a sound. No one moved. The birds didn’t sing. The wind didn’t blow. The earth was silent, too

Two of the figures, a man and a woman, placed a wreath of fire lillies over the marker. “Goodbye, Aang,” the man said. Zuko and Katara moved back to the group. Katara was crying silently. Zuko put his arm around her. “Aang was the most kind, tender-hearted, most courageous person I ever knew,” Zuko said.

“He always tried to help others,” Sokka added.

“He risked his life to save the world,” Katara whispered.

Toph sniffed loudly. “He was the only one man enough to take me on in Earth Rumble 6.”

“We’ll miss him,” Zuko said softly. Just a week ago, Sozin’s Comet had returned. While he and Katara had fought Azula, and Sokka, Toph, and Suki and taken on the Air Ship Fleet, Aang had fought Firelord Ozai by himself. And then one of Ozai’s shots of lightning had found it’s target...

“I just can’t believe he’s gone... forever...” Toph said softly. Zuko put his other arm around her.

“We should start back to the palace. The memorial ceremony is going to start in about an hour,” Zuko said.

The five of them- Zuko, Katara, Toph, Suki, and Sokka- started back towards the city. Toph looked over her shoulder at the marker surrounded by dozens of flowers. “Goodbye, Aang. I’ll miss you,” she said as a tear leaked out of the corner of her eye. The rain fell harder as she turned and walked away.
So, a while ago I got an idea to draw a sad, older Toph, and have her hair down and blowing in the wind. Then I thought, "Hrm, why is she crying?" That bugged me for about a day. Then I came up with the question, "What if Ozai HAD killed Aang?" (OMG PLOT RUINED :noes:) And then that started to play in my mind. Aang dies. And then I wondered, (again) "How would the rest of the Gang feel? How would they react individually? How would this affect their lives?" And thus, this fanfic was born! This is only the prologue, though, so it just explains what happened. The next chapters will be longer. Oh, and expect some Zutara and Taang. With a little Sukka thrown in. =D

EDIT: Oh! I forgot to say something about the title! Yes, I used the title of an Avril Lavigne song for this story. I was thinking about it, and it really fits well with the story, so, yeah. The song "When You're Gone" is owned by her.

DISCLAIMER: Avatar: The Last Airbender is owned by Nickelodeon, Mike and Bryan, and Viacom.

P.S. If anyone wants to draw this scene, please let me know. Thanks!

EDIT: Okay, originally I was going to make this a series, but I'm not really sure where I want to go with it. I've written two versions of what was going to be Chapter One, but I don't really like either. So this is just a short story now.
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crazymik's avatar
its a realy sad short story, very touching.

what i don get is, why do they think he's gone forever? hes the avatar, he'll just get reincarnated into the water tribe, wouldn't he?